In the article
featured in the New York Times, "Yes, I'm in a clique", Nathan Black
describes the dynamics of the high school social scene, particularly cliques.
Black was a freshman in high school when this essay was published in 1999 and
not only is he incredibly eloquent while making his point, but he also has an
in-depth understanding of what really goes on in the social aspects of high
school. (For only a freshmen, he had a lot going for him.) To his audience of
both high schoolers and parents alike, he essentially states that cliques are
not necessarily a bad thing, contrary to popular opinion. Though his use of a
blunt tone while describing personal experiences and figurative language,
Nathan Black illustrates his firsthand knowledge of the topic and makes the
claim that cliques are a natural part of high school social life. While
describing the dynamics of a clique, he uses a simile to make a comparison. He
says, "Each of these groups is as autonomous as any sovereign nation. The
members sit together, eat together, go out together and, in this time of
sorrow, often grieve together." This quote illustrates his understanding
of the loyalty clique members feel towards one another, much like that of loyal
members of a country. He also indicates with the word, "autonomous",
that each does their own thing. Nathan utilizes a blunt tone through a majority
of the essay, while describing his experience and ideals when it comes to
cliques. He says, "That is not to say I think it's right to ridicule the
people I think are nerds. While some cliques may go to extremes that border on
outright discrimination, by high school most exclusivity is much more subtle;
if I don't like someone, I ignore him. That way, he'll never even want to
belong to my group because he doesn't know what we're like." This blunt
description of the common philosophy held by many high-schoolers indicates that
Nathan is incredibly educated on the subject. Through his use of words, like I,
he makes his ideals and concepts more tangible for his audience. Overall, I
think that Nathan wrote an excellent essay and did a great job achieving his
purpose. Through his use of figurative language and a blunt tone, he claims
that cliques are not necessarily a bad thing. In "Yes, I am in a
clique", Nathan Black explains how cliques are a natural part of the high
school social scene his eloquent description is truly one to remember.
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