In the essay, The Way to Rainy Mountain, N. Scott Momaday
tells of the customs, history and practices of his people and ancestors, the
Kiowas. Momaday is a well-known Native American Author and is very in touch
with his culture. He appears to address the masses and I believe that this
piece was really intended for anyone who is willing to read it. Through his use
of imagery and figurative language, he is able to paint a vivid picture in the
mind of the reader in order to educate them about his people's way of life.
Momaday emphasizes the fact that the kiowa people are a plain tribe and he
talks much about nature and their home. He says, "The grass turns brittle
and brown and cracks beneath your feet.. Great green and yellow grasshoppers
are everywhere in the tall grass, popping up like corn to sting the
flesh…". This is just one instance that the author uses this incredibly
descriptive and detailed language and really helps the reader get a true
glimpse into the home area of the Kiowa tribe. Momaday also uses a lot of
figurative language. One quote that really stuck out to me was, "The sun
follows a longer course in the day, and the sky is immense beyond all
comparison. The great billowing clouds that sail upon it are shadows that move
upon the grain like water, dividing light." His strategic use of metaphor
gives the audience a better understanding of what the sky really did and how he
perceived it to be. Over all, I thought that Momaday did an excellent job in
achieving his purpose. I felt as though I was standing there next to him, in
the southern plains as he vividly described his people's home and way of life.
I really enjoyed, The Way to Rainy Mountain,
and have never read a text with such detail and description.
Sunday, December 21, 2014
Sunday, December 14, 2014
TOW #13: Frank Sinatra Has a Cold
In the essay, Frank
Sinatra Has a Cold, Gay Talese profiles and describes one of the biggest icons
of all time, Frank Sinatra. Talese, an reknown american author, helped to
define literary journalism, which is undoubtedly shown in this particular
piece. He wrote for both the New York Times and Esquire Magazine, two of the
most popular journals in America, so he appears to be writing to the common
people, who want a glimpse into what Sinatra is really like. In order to paint
the true picture of the established singer/actor, he uses vivid imagery and
anaphora to achieve his purpose. His use of imagery and detailed descriptions
give the reader a holistic idea of Sinatra's world. Talese writes, " He
had been silent during much of the evening, except now in this private club in
Beverly Hills he seemed even more distant, staring out through the smoke and
semidarkness into a large room beyond the bar where dozens of large couples sat
huddled around small tables or twisted in the center of the floor to the
clamorous clang of folk-rock music blaring from the stereo." This
extremely detailed description is just one example of how Talese incorporates
imagery in order to illustrate the typical scene of the singer. He also uses
anaphora to add emphasis on important subjects. While describing how Sinatra is
viewed by people, he says, "Or better still, he is what in traditional
Sicily have long been called uomini rispettati -- men of respect: men who are
both majestic and humble, men who are loved by all and are very generous by
nature, men whose hands are kissed as they walk from village to village, men
who would personally go out of their way to redress a wrong." He uses
similar forms for multiple phrases to provide an in-depth example of how others
view Frank. Overall, I believe that Talese wrote a truly excellent piece and
helped me see the iconic singer in a very different way. Frank Sinatra Has a Cold has to be one of
the best nonfiction pieces I have ever read, and it was thanks to Talese's
extreme skill and detailed descriptions that gave me a glimpse into the life of
one of my favorite singers.
Sunday, December 7, 2014
TOW #12: The Omnivore's Dilemma #1
In
the book, The Omnivore's Dilemma: A Natural
History of Four Meals, Michael Pollan discusses the impact of the food
industry on America and how what we eat can majorly change our society. An
published author, journalist, activist and Berkeley professor, Michael Pollan
delves deep into the world of food and stresses how choosing what to eat is
incredibly important. While addressing his large audience of American food
consumers, he uses a second person point of view and complex diction to show
that food problems are extremely widespread and to stress the importance of having
knowledge regarding food consumption. His use of a second person point of view
has a major impact on the text. He says, "Grab a beer for your beverage
instead and you'd still be drinking corn. Read the ingredients on the label of
any processed food and, provided you know the chemical names it travels under,
corn is what you will find" (18). This strategic use of "you"
makes the topic seem much more general and widespread. Pollan is speaking
directly to his audience and essentially saying this applies to all of you, not
just me. It not only makes the book more approachable and easy to visualize but
it also makes his point stronger. He also uses very complex and specific
diction to increase his credibility. He describes, " For modified or
unmodified starch, for glucose syrup and maltodextrin, for crystalline fructose
and ascorbic acid, for lecithin and dextrose, lactic acid and lysine, for
maltose and HFCS, for MSG and for polyols, for the caramel color and xanthan
gum, read: corn" (19). All of these big and scientific words increase
Pollan's ethos by making him appear to be very educated about the topic of
food. It adds a lot of weight to his argument. After reading much of the text,
I do think that Pollan did an exceptional job at achieving his purpose. I feel
much more educated about the modern food industry and I think that this book
would be beneficial for everyone to read. Through his use of second person
point of view and complex diction, Michael Pollan attempts to educate Americans
of the importance of food and their choices regarding it.
Sunday, November 23, 2014
TOW #11 - Taylor Strikes A Chord
In Taylor Strikes a Chord, Jack Dickey highlights
the shocking success of the pop icon, Taylor Swift. Jack Dickey, a journalist
for Time and Magazine, is known for his contributions regarding culture and
music. Taylor Swift is one of the most successful musicians of this generations
and Dickey not only portrays her as a role mode and symbol but as a successful
performer. To Taylor's fans and just followers of the music industry in
general, he emphasizes the mark that she has left on the world of music. Jack
Dickey uses facts and statistics and quotes from various sources in order to
illustrate Swift's success in the music industry. Her success in album sales
has been a constant factor in her career. Dickey says, "… Swift was the
nation's best-selling artist in 2008 and in 2010 and No. 2 in 2012, the last
three years she released albums." His appeal to logos supports his attempt
to prove Taylor Swift to be one of the most successful artists of the time. He
also uses quotes from sources, including Swift, herself. She says, "I just
struggle to find a woman in music who hasn’t been completely picked apart by
the media, or scrutinized and criticized for aging, or criticized for fighting
aging.. It just seems to be much more difficult to be a woman in music and to grow
older. I just really hope I will choose to do it as gracefully as
possible." His use of quotes from Taylor swift increases his credibility
and helps support his argument. I believe that Jack Dickey definitely achieved
his purpose. I am not a huge Taylor Swift, but after reading this article, I
cannot deny the success she's had and her impact on modern music. Through his
appeals to logos and ethos, Jack Dickey encourages all lovers of music to give
Taylor a listen.
Sunday, November 16, 2014
TOW #10: The Persistence of Memory
In the infamous
painting, The Persistence of Memory,
Salvador Dali illustrates a dream-like scene of distorted clocks and this piece
is considered a vastly important surrealist piece. Dali, a renowned Spanish
surrealist painter, is considered one of the most prominent artists of the 20th
century and his deformed and crazy images left a significant mark on the world
of art. He appears to address the masses by illustrating his views on time and
memory. In the painting, he utilizes subdued colors, distorted images and
symbols, and irony to argue his view of the inconsistency of time and memory in
the modern world. The fact that he painted 4 clocks melting away in a lonely
desert and he uses the word persistence in the title is incredibly ironic.
Melting does not symbolize persistency and this use of irony implies his views
of how neither time nor memory are constant. Also, one of the clocks is covered
with ants as a symbol of decay and how time can, in fact, deteriorate. The
subdued and natural colors used in the painting give the piece a realistic
flare, yet the deformed clocks and figure on the ground contrast with that
flare and give a dream-like sense. The figure on the ground also has their eyes
closed, possibly indicating that they are in a dream as well, where time passes
even faster than in everyday life. This strategic juxtaposition was important
to many surrealist painters, especially Dali, as seen in many of his other
paintings and his use of very different images and symbols to display a common
theme. I believe that Dali achieved his
purpose of proving the inconsistency of time and memory. His strategic use of
symbols and irony support his argument that neither of these facets are
constant and that time passes very differently when in various states of mind,
like dreaming. The Persistence of Memory is considered one of Dali's most
famous works, and rightfully so, due to the fact that it poignantly emphasizes
his own perceptions of time and memory.
Wednesday, November 12, 2014
IRB Introduction #2 - The Omnivore's Dilemma
For my second IRB, I have choosen The Omnivore's Dilemma: A Natural History of Four Meals by Michael Pollan. Throughout the book, he discusses american eating habits and the vast aspects of food and its effect on culture. I find this particular topic so interesting and I cannot wait to start reading!
Sunday, November 9, 2014
TOW #9 - Coatesville by John Jay Chapman
In
his address, Coatesville, John Jay
Chapman discusses the importance of human morality and the need for equality
throughout America. Very disturbed by the lynching of a black man that took
place in the town of Coatesville, PA in 1911, Chapman travels to the town in
1912 to recognize and remember the tragic event by holding a prayer meeting.
Although only two people attended, he speaks to the entire population of the
town and America and addresses the serious issue that this event highlighted.
In his address, Coatesville, John Jay
Chapman uses personal anecdotes and metaphor in order to emphasize his beliefs
on what America needs in order to become a better place, where these awful
crimes do not occur. His use of personal anecdotes have a major effect on the
entire piece. He says, "I will tell you why I am here; I will tell you
what happened to me. When I read in the newspapers of August 14, a year ago,
about the burning alive of a human being, and of how a few desperate,
fiend-minded men had been permitted to torture a man… I seemed to get a glimpse
into the unconscious soul of this country…I seemed to be looking into the heart
of the criminal - a cold thing, an awful thing" (72). This recounting of
how he learned of the situation explains how he realized the flaws of the
American people and what was needed for change to ensue. He thus continues to
explain how he believed that the issue was deeply rooted with the slave trade
and that the only solution was new life, life in which the human disposition in
hearts and souls will change. His strategic use of metaphors also plays a
significant role. He says, "The people stood like blighted things, like
ghosts about Acheron, waiting for someone or something to determine their
destiny for them" (72). This quote paints a very vivid and horrifying
picture of the lack of action that the bystanders took while watching the
lynching. He explains that one of the central issues was not only the lynching,
but the fact that there were hundreds of witnesses and that no one even
attempted to stop it. I believe that Chapman definitely achieved his purpose.
The personal anecdotes and metaphors made the address extremely powerful and I
felt that it was a very important and revolutionary text of the time. In Coatesville, John Jay Chapman attempts to
address the needs of America and highlights racial issues in an extremely
revolutionary way.
Sunday, October 26, 2014
TOW #8 - Blink TOW #2
In his bestseller, Blink, Malcom Gladwell digs deep into the
human conscience and discovers the true reasoning for why we think the way we
do. In his 2nd nonfiction book regarding psychology, he discusses the quick
judgments that people make and why they occur. In response to his first novel,
The Tipping Point, many people have wondered why the sociological changes in
everyday life happen, and he addresses these people and enlightens them with
facts, stories and questions to think about, dealing with human intuition and
its effect on the world. He then wants his audience to act in response to their
judgments, whether it be a change in mindset or a change in perspective. In
order to educate his audience about "the power of thinking without
thinking", Gladwell uses anecdotes and quotes from credible sources
throughout the entire text. The anecdotes really made the entire book quite
intriguing and he talks of a variety of different things, including marriage
counseling, food tasters, and the seemingly never-ending Coca-cola vs. Pepsi
battle. One towards the end of the book talked of gender equality in symphonies
and how in the past, conductors believed that men just sounded better than
women. He says, " Musicians were identified not by name but by number.
Screens were erected between the committee and the auditioner… and as these new
rules were put in place around the country, an extraordinary thing happened:
orchestras began to hire women" (250). This is a prime example of how the
snap judgments of others have a major effect on society, one of Gladwell's
central arguments. He quotes various sources, thus appealing to ethos.
Regarding the symphony anecdote, he uses quotes from established musicians,
quoting, " 'The very first time the new rules for auditions were used, we
were looking for four new violinists,' remembers Herb Weksleblatt, a tuba
player for the Metropolitan Opera in New York… 'And all of the winners were
women. That would simply never have happened before. ' " By using quotes
from those with firsthand experience, he establishes his credibility and
appeals to ethos throughout the entire text. I found this entire book very
interesting, and I do believe Gladwell achieved his purpose. His countless
examples made it easier for the reader to relate and I found myself
reconsidering my intuition and snap judgments. Throughout Blink, Malcolm
Gladwell encourages readers to consider their mindsets and discusses the
importance of acting if a change needs to be made.
Sunday, October 19, 2014
Tow #7 - "Meet Joko Widodo"
In the profile piece
of Joko Widodo, Hannah Beech introduces the new leader. The recently elected
7th president of Indonesia, Joko Widodo or Mr. Jokowi for short, will be sworn
into office on October 20th, 2014 and in this piece, is described in great detail.
Hannah Beech, an established journalist and the Southeast Asia Bureau Chief for
Time Magazine, appears to be introducing Mr. Jokowi to the entire world, in
order for everyone to become familiar with the new leader and his practices.
She uses direct quotes from the president himself and other credible sources in
order to establish credibility and intense diction to emphasize the seriousness
of the role that he is taking on. She uses these strategies to present the new
president to the world. One important quote from the president was his
description of his life with his family. Beech quotes, " 'My family, we
worked very hard for basic human needs, like food, education, health care,' He
says. 'That’s why I know from my experience that democracy must deliver a
better life to the people.' " In this direct quote from the president,
Beech illustrates his willingness to work hard and how he really understands
what many of his citizens are going through, only increasing his want to help
them and proving him to be a man of the people. She also quotes other sources,
like Ernest Bower, chairman for the
southeast Asia studies at the center for strategic and international studies
(CSIS). He said, " ' My gut tells me history is going to call on Jokowi to
provide leadership and he will fulfill it.' " This powerful quote
emphasizes the belief that Jokowi will be successful as president and displays
the faith that many people have in him and his practices. Beech also uses very
strong words, which constantly changes the tone of the piece. When describing
many of the problems in Indonesia, she used words like, flustered, issues,
challenges, aggressively, and vulnerable, giving that section a very tense and
serious tone. These are just a few examples of her intense diction which
affects the entire tone of the profile. I think that Beech definitely achieved
her purpose. After reading, I felt much more educated not only about Jokowi,
but about the entire archipelago of Indonesia and its economy and culture. This
profile effectively introduced the new leader to the world and the world looks
forward to seeing what he will achieve as the President of Indonesia.
Sunday, October 12, 2014
Tow #6: "Asphaltisation" - visual text
In
this powerful advertisement, titled "Asphaltisation", SAMU social
displays the biggest struggle that homeless people face, trying to get off of
the streets, in a very literal way. This French humanitarian emergency service
company is active in cities all over France and the rest of the world,
providing care and supplies to homeless people or those who are in "social
distress". Through this advertisement, they address those who may be at
risk of becoming homeless and those who have the potential to help people who
are in living on the streets. SAMU social appeals to pathos and dark coloring
in an attempt to illustrate the severity and the struggles of living life on
the streets and to inspire people to lend help to these less fortunate people.
Pictured in the ad are an old man and a dog, both embedded in the cement of a
sidewalk, looking very depressed and tired. In the corner, it says in French,
" The longer you live on the streets, the harder it is to get off
it.", thus explaining why they are pictured, enveloped in the concrete.
Both elderly people and dogs are groups that people tend to feel emotional
towards and to see them struggling is very sad to look at. The elderly man is
not wearing proper shoes and appears to be struggling to keep his eyes open.
The image of them sinking into the soil is very powerful and quickly grasps
people's attention. This strategic use of pathos is an attempt to evoke
sympathy in those who see the ad and it makes them want to help the unfortunate
man and dog. They also use very dark colors, giving the advertisement a gloomy
and dark vibe. Both of these strategies used in the ad help SAMU social's
attempt to achieve their purpose, by grasping the attention of their audience
and by giving the entire ad a sad feeling. I think that the service company
definitely achieved their purpose. When I saw this ad, I immediately felt bad
for both the man and the dog and I wanted to help them, no matter what. In
Asphaltisation, SAMU social effectively depicts a major struggle of the
homeless and inspires people to lend help to those on the streets.
Sunday, October 5, 2014
Tow #5 - Now Arriving - The Deadly Ebola Virus Lands in America
In
Now Arriving - The Deadly Ebola Virus Lands in
America, David Von Drehle highlights the frightening fact that Ebola has
finally come to the United States. A successful author and journalist for Time
Magazine, Drehle explains the outbreak story in vivid detail and its potential
impact on the rest of the country. Addressing American citizens, he writes in
an attempt to educate them about the deadly virus and its side effects, and to
explain how it found its way to the U.S. In this piece, David Von Drehle
appeals to logos and ethos and uses figurative language in order to achieve his
purpose. Throughout the article, he appeals to logos and uses various facts and
statistics, explaining the significance of the virus. He says, "With more
than 3,300 people dead in the growing West African epidemic, the arrival of
Ebola in the U.S. is indeed unnerving news". This number illustrates the
effect of Ebola on people in other countries and how it has the potential to
majorly affect the U.S. He also gives basic facts about Ebola, including,
" Patients are contagious only when they are suffering symptoms: fever,
muscle aches, vomiting and so on." By stating basic side effects, he
attempts to educate his audience about what cases of Ebola may look like and
what they should look for. He also appeals to ethos, by using many quotes, from
very credible sources, including the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention
(CDC), Texas Governor, Rick Perry and even President Obama. These pieces of
information used by Drehle, help him establish his credibility and
trustworthiness to his readers, giving his argument more weight. He also uses
figurative language, including metaphors, in an attempt to achieve his purpose.
When talking of containing the case, he says, "It can be tedious work,
though, and it is only as good as the front-line caregivers who are the point
of the spear". The author seemingly compares the containment of Ebola with
fighting a tough battle, with "the front line caregivers", being
doctors acting as soldiers fighting the virus, and "the front of the
spear", being the direct attack of the issue. This metaphor helps
illustrate the importance of Ebola and the difficulty it will take to
extinguish it from the United States. I think that Drehle achieved his purpose
during this piece. Before reading, I did not have a great idea of what kind of
virus Ebola is and what its side effects are. Now, I am much more educated on
the subject and I know what to look for, in the case that Ebola spreads
throughout the country. In this Global Health Article, David Von Drehle
effectively describes Ebola to American citizens, and discusses the importance
of the problem it proposes.
Sunday, September 28, 2014
TOW #4 - Humanities, All Too Humanities!
In his piece, Humanities, All Too Humanities, Joel Stein
humorously emphasizes the importance of liberal arts majors. An established
columnist for Time Magazine, Stein describes how the humanities are
experiencing a fall out, due to the admission process of colleges around the
country and the increasing popularity of sciences and technology majors. The
subtitle of his column states, "Incoming college freshmen should study
great books rather than come up with great apps", indicating that he is
addressing students who are applying or entering college. He also addresses
college admission offices in general, pointing out the exact types of students
they have been accepting (and not accepting). Joel Stein appeals to ethos and
logos and uses humor in an attempt to achieve his purpose of giving important
advice to colleges and college students. At the beginning of this piece, he
states that he majored in English and he gives a personal example and says that
he went out to lunch with a fellow Stanford graduate, indicating that he
graduated from that school, one of the best colleges in the country. In both of
these examples, Stein appeals to ethos, indicating he has a lot of knowledge on
the topics of liberal arts majors, and that he attended one of the most
prestigious schools in the country. He also uses logos to help achieve his
purpose and gives data and statistics. He states, "In 2010, 7% of U.S.
graduates majored in one of the liberal arts, compared with 14% in 1966…".
Stein gives these facts in order to illustrate the decrease in popularity of
the humanities, in an attempt to achieve his purpose. His humorous tone also
helps him to educate his audience. When discussing why he majored in English
and not another topic, he says, "I didn’t choose not to physics. Physics
chose not to have me major in it, by make absolutely no sense at all". By
providing information in this humorous way, Stein captivates his audience and
makes his topic more intriguing. As a rising college student, I thought that
Joel Stein did an excellent job and achieved his purpose. He not only made me
laugh, but provided some important points to consider and I learned some new
things about college admissions. In this column, the author, Joel Stein,
effectively discusses the importance of college majors and attempts to educate
his audience while doing so.
Sunday, September 21, 2014
TOW #3: "Crest Dice ad" - Visual Text
In this
advertisement, a toothpaste company, Crest, discusses how risks should not be
taken, regarding cavities and dental health. Crest, one of the world's biggest
dental hygiene businesses, has been incredibly successful, selling various
products, including toothpaste, toothbrushes, floss and mouthwash. In this
advertisement, they appear to be speaking to potential customers, particularly
those who have suffered from cavities before, stating that second chances for
healthy teeth are not given to those who take the chance of not properly caring
for their teeth. Crest uses many rhetorical devices, in an attempt to achieve
their purpose, including analogy. They compare oral hygiene with gambling,
picturing two teeth with various holes, similar to those of dice, and state
"There are some things you just can't afford to gamble with". This
comparison serves to describe to the audience that taking a chance, similar to
gambling, with their teeth's well-being is not a smart decision. With this analogy,
they also appeal to pathos, working to convince their audience of how big of a
risk it is not to use their products. They appeal to ethos when they state that
Crest is "The dentist's choice for fighting cavities", meaning that
dental experts highly recommend their products.
They also establish their
credibility, when they state that "Crest has prevented 523 million
cavities since its introduction in 1955", displaying that they have been
in business for a very long time and they appeal to logos, by providing data
about the number of cavities their products have prevented. With the strategic
use of all of these devices, Crest achieves their purpose of convincing
consumers to purchase their products. The first time I saw this ad, I felt
convinced that Crest would achieve its ultimate goal of enhancing dental
health, and I thought that I should maybe start to purchase their products. In
this powerful advertisement, Crest effectively promises to help prevent
cavities and to stop people from risking their oral hygiene.
Sunday, September 14, 2014
IRB TOW #1: Blink by Malcolm Gladwell
In his number 1
national bestseller, Blink, Malcolm
Gladwell discusses "the power of thinking without thinking" and
provides the reasoning for rapid decision making. A renown nonfiction writer
and journalist, Gladwell has completed multiple works, many of which are
concerned with sociology and psychology. His first novel, The Tipping Point, discusses sociological
changes that occur in everyday life and in Blink,
he explains why these changes occur. Throughout history, many have wondered why
quick decisions and judgments arise and Gladwell speaks to these people,
answering their questions with facts, stories and personal opinions. Throughout
the text so far, he has strategically used many rhetorical devices like
anecdotes and hypophora. In the introduction, he tells the story of a kouros,
an ancient Greek sculpture of a nude male youth, and the J. Paul Getty Museum.
In this anecdote, the Getty Museum wants to purchase this statue but many
experts advise them against it, denying its authenticity, despite scientific
evidence of its age. It's in this story that he introduces the central topic of
Blink, quick decisions and judgments. He
says, "What did Harrison see? She didn't know. In the very first moment,
when Houghton swished off the cloth, all Harrison had was a hunch, an
instinctive sense that something was amiss" (5). Gladwell's use of this
anecdote helps him to introduce his topic and provide a strong example its
applicability. In order to educate his readers in a coherent way, Gladwell also
uses hypophora. When talking of marriage analysis, he says, "If couples
aren't aware of how they sound, how much value can there be in asking them
direct questions? Not much, and this is way Gottman has couples talk about
something involving their marriage…" (39). By asking a question at the
beginning of a paragraph and then providing an answer, Gladwell uses hypophora
to answer questions and to easily transition from one topic to another. He uses
these strategies in order to educate, stir questions and to provide facts of
decision making. Based on the information I have read so far, Gladwell has
already achieved this purpose. Although I am still reading, I have learned more
about psychology and the reasoning behind various decisions. In Blink, Malcolm Gladwell informs his audience
of many aspects of cognition and effectively writes to leave an impression of
the influence that decisions have on our everyday lives.
Sunday, September 7, 2014
IRB Introduction: Blink By Malcolm Gladwell
For my first IRB, I chose Blink by Malcolm Gladwell. In this book, the author discusses various aspects of psychology and human behavior and gives an array of examples to further the readers understanding. I chose this text because I have heard a lot of great things about this book and it was reccomended to me by a friend, who enjoyed not only this book, but some other books written by Gladwell. As someone who has always been interested in anthropology, I hope to have a better understanding of human behavior and natural human instincts after reading and I am so excited to read Blink by Malcom Gladwell!
TOW #1: How to Say Nothing in 500 Words
In How to Say Nothing in 500 Words, Paul Roberts
provides readers with vital advice in order to achieve writing success. An
established author of various writing textbooks, including Patterns of English and Understanding English, Paul Roberts seemingly
breaks down the artistry of the English language into a science of writing and
composition. In this piece, he appears to be speaking to English students, by
giving a particular scenario of what a student goes through while writing a
paper, and using a second - person point of view, constantly using the word,
you, thus, giving the sense that he is directly addressing them. Throughout the
text, Roberts offers tips and pointers on how to write effectively and what
students should and should not do, to improve their composition skills. The
author uses many important rhetorical devices, including an informal, humorous
tone and personification. In the excerpt, his informal, humorous tone helps his
audience relate to his statements about writing. For example, when talking of
the differences of writing in 19th and 20th centuries, he claims that more
people today prefer less dramatic literature, stating, " Some people like
that sort of thing, but most modern readers would say, 'Good grief,' and turn
on the television" (65). In this humorous line, he makes his topic more
intriguing for his audience, helping them grasp a better understand of what he
saying. He also uses personification when talking about many aspects of composition.
For example, he states, "Some pat expressions stand like a wall between
the writer and thought" (64). Through his use of personification, he
emphatically points out the effects of various writing skills, educating his
audience in an interesting way. By using these rhetorical strategies, Roberts
informs his audience of how to write effectively and gives many important
pieces of advice, hoping to improve their writing skills. I felt that these
devices helped him achieve his purpose because there were certain aspects
discussed in this essay that I could use in my composition skills and after
reading, I had some new writing techniques under my belt. In How to Say Nothing in 500 Words, Paul Roberts
effectively writes to his readers, teaching them valuable writing skills and
giving important pointers, to help them succeed in the science of composition.
Monday, September 1, 2014
Analysis of Bop (Langston Hughes)
In Bop, Langston Hughes highlights prominent cultural issues through a straightforward dialogue between two characters. Discussing the music, “be - bop”, one character, Simple explains its origins and purpose to a nameless narrator, who is oblivious to the current trend. In Bop, written in 1949, the author, Langston Hughes, emphasizes a controversial issue of the time, racial inequality. His work and influence during the Harlem Renaissance protested black suppression and his poetry expressed his feelings toward the problem and his pride of his culture. In the essay, he writes to illustrate common prejudices and their influence on aspects of culture, including music. Intending the audience to be those unaware of black discrimination and its cultural effect, Hughes strategically uses colloquialism and allusions. His use of colloquialism is evident when Simple uses informal jargon and slang, at one point, stating, “‘That’s why so many white folks don’t dig Bop’” (191). Simple’s broken language helps the narrator and reader easily grasp the significant issue. Hughes uses allusions, which is clear when Simple explains that the origin of the music is from the police. He describes that the sounds used in the music come from white police officers hitting black people on the head. He says, “‘White folks do not get their heads beat just for being white. But me - a cop is liable to grab me almost any time and beat my head - just for being colored’” (191). This is not only a direct statement from Simple, regarding the racial issues of his area, but just one example, alluding to the greater problem of racial inequality and how prejudices and personal bias are affecting the justice of black - american citizens. These strategies helped Langston Hughes to achieve his purpose. After reading, I had gathered a better understanding of the prevalence of racial inequality and how it truly stirred black americans. In Bop, Langston Hughes provides readers with a glimpse of a controversial time in history, and how society significantly shapes cultures all over the world.
An Oblivious Trend-Setter By beating black citizens, white policemen unknowingly inspired the music “Be - bop”. Source: Detriots-great-rebellion.com |
Analysis of The Crack-Up (F. Scott Fitzgerald)
In The Crack - Up, F. Scott Fitzgerald gives insights on his personal journey through a mental crisis or “crack - up”. During his breakdown, Fitzgerald analyzes his mentality and character, and feels empty, regarding countless aspects of his life. This essay, written in 1936, also discusses society, and its influence, including during the great depression. To escape this dreary time, many found refuge in movies, drifting from novels. Fitzgerald’s earlier work, including his novels, This Side of Paradise and The Great Gatsby were left behind. During the essay, he gives details of his insanity, and informs those who may be subject to breakdowns of what may occur. By providing personal examples, he explains, to those close to him and to those who enjoy his work, his actions and what ensued during this troubled time. Fitzgerald’s use of analogy and dramatic undertones provide an accurate understanding of his emotions. He compares himself to a cracked plate, explaining, “...the cracked plate has to be retained in the pantry... It can never again be warmed on the stove nor shuffled with the other plates in the dishpan..” (144). In this example, he claims that the cracked plate has to be isolated, affecting its character. Similar to the plate, he also is damaged, changing his nature. This powerful analogy illustrates Fitzgerald’s newfound isolation, and how he is changed, like the plate. He also gives the piece a dramatic undertone. While asking advice from a doctor, he describes, “I might have asked some of it from her, neatly wrapped and ready for home cooking and digestion, but I could never have got it - not if I’d waited around for a thousand hours with the tin cup of self - pity” (143). In this example, he emphasizes his emotions and by using these strategies, achieved his purpose. After further researching Fitzgerald, I noticed how his feelings described in the essay were directly applicable to his actions and I felt sympathetic towards his struggle. In The Crack - Up, F. Scott Fitzgerald exposes his vulnerable and wavering character yet manages to find solace by pulling into himself and his writing.
Caution: Fragile! Fitzgerald compares his wavering mentality with a broken plate: delicate and weak. Source: Finedininglovers.com |
Analysis of Pamplona in July (Ernest Hemingway)
In Pamplona in July, Ernest Hemingway recounts his summer visit to the town, Pamplona, in Northern Spain, renown for hosting a bullfighting festival every July (98). Throughout the piece, Hemingway vividly narrates his experiences and describes the traditions, people and culture of the town, and the riveting bullfights he attended. The essay, published in 1923, was not the first of Hemingway’s successes. While writing as a journalist, he also published many short pieces and two books featuring his works. This trip was the first of many to the festival, which served as inspiration for his first novel, The Sun Also Rises. During the piece, Hemingway not only informs the reader of what occurred on his trip, but brings the reader on a journey into the little town with him. He writes to paint a descriptive picture of his experience around Pamplona and at the bullfights themselves. To those who enjoy unique adventures and who may be interested in attending the festival, he tells his story, using strong diction, straightforward phrases and asyndeton, giving a descriptive glimpse of his experience. He gives the piece a candid tone, using strong diction and straightforward phrases. With short, descriptive phrases, he pulls the reader into the loud arena with him. He states, “Then the bull charges and bags another man. The crowd roars with delight” (102). His strong diction and short phrases help him inform the reader and give an honest recount of what occurs. To provide a better understanding of the context, he emphatically uses asyndeton. While talking of a skillful bullfighter, he says, “He handled them all. Did it all. Cape play easy, graceful, confident” (105). By excluding conjunctions, he highlights the ease of the man’s actions, giving an exciting, wondrous mood to the piece. With his interesting craft, Hemingway achieved his goal. I felt like I was sitting alongside the Hemingways in the roaring arena, and after reading, I knew much more about bullfighting and the festival. Ernest Hemingway’s essay, Pamplona in July, illustrates his journey through another culture, and gives a direct glimpse into this exquisite world.
Terri - bull Safety The bulls run freely through the streets and crowds of Pamplona to the arena, where the fighting takes place. Source: PBS.org |
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